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the girl who stands and stares
looking over the crowd
never joining in
because its always far too loud

the girl who found a man
who is very stout
he likes to fish
without a doubt

the girl who writes and writes
but never shares
the feelings inside
or the thoughts that she has bared

the girl who comments and faves
all the things that relate
to how she feels
to how she can't think straight

the girl who watches
and listens
never wanting to shout
but shouting is the only way
anyone can ever find her out

the girl who talks to herself
never wanting to share
with anyone
the feelings she bares

the girl who never trusts
because she's been hurt
when someones broke their word
and ground it into the dirt

the girl who promises
things she has to keep
like she won't cut again
or try to sneak
she must speak up
if she thinks suicide is a must

the girl who sits in dark corners
counting to hundreds and thousands
trying to tame the thoughts
that drive past her
in billions and trillions

the girl who watches the stars
because she knows that they fall
she wishes she could catch them
so they wouldn't know the pain at all

the girl who runs in the rain
because it can mask all the pain
no one sees the tears
even in vain if they try

the girl who wants to die
because she can never get past the sky
she is always stuck to the ground
with all the hate and lies

the girl who is lost
who can't get things straight
sometimes she thinks
it'd be better if she
didn't stick around and wait

the girl who has true love
she bares her heart to him
she trusts completely
always giving in

the girl who walks
just to clear her head
because all of her thoughts
leave her wanting to be dead

the girl who dreams
dreams not of happy places
but of death by sword
and blood mixed in laces

the girl who reads
fantasy, fiction
anything to get rid of her thoughts and addiction

the girl who hides
just wanting to be found
by the one that holds her heart sound

the girl who runs
not because she just wants to be free
but she wants the one she loves
to follow her and see

the girl who has ptsd
with strong bouts of angry
when flashbacks strike
she lays in the weather

the girl who is depressed
does not want attention
she just wants understanding
and closeness
with affection

all in all
all this girl wants
is to be who she is
without having second thoughts
she wants to be loved
and treated right
she wants to be who she is
without a fight

she is lost in a chaotic storm
hoping and praying someday she will be warm
she knows not really who she is
but someday she will
and she will always be his.
OKAY

Well this just came to me while I was thinking about the Identity Contest that :iconlooselacespoetry: is having! I just had to join in on it.

So this was born for that contest!

It explains a lot about me, but so little in the same sense, but that's how I like it, so confusing on who I am as that is how it is in my head.

oh addiction isn't really an addiction but it helped with the word scheme, and rhyme scheme, that could be an addiction because i hate when it doesn't rhyme, it must have some sort of rhyme! otherwise i'm not happy. seriously. lolz.


ptsd - post traumatic stress disorder

no one is allowed to take this and repost it anywhere, no one is allowed to claim it as their own. if anyone wants to use it for anything note me first asking my permission. if i say yes make sure you give me credit and a link to where and what you used it in, if i say no, than that is precisely what it means, no. if anyone does notice my work anywhere without my permission note me and let me know.
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asinnersavedbygrace Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
Hey you're good in writing. It actually defines my personality. :) keep it up!
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Frozenonthesea Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, that comment made my day :D
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
"The girl who stands and stares, looking over the crowd, never joining in, because its always far too loud."

That's so me from my pov. :wow: Fantastic wording! :aww: Except maybe at the begining of each verse, there is meant to be a capital letter at the start of each line. ^^; I'm pointing that out to you. Either way, it's still good. ^^
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Frozenonthesea Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it is how i feel

i know...... i just chose not to at times
it just depends
even now
notice lack of capitals? lolz

thanks very much
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I can realte. :nod: Because of my ant-sized blob of autism, my ears can't stand loud noises. ^^;

:lol: Yeah, I did notice. Wouldn't poems normally have capitals? ^^;

:hug:
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Frozenonthesea Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
i have ADHD, PTSD, depression(which is not diagnosed by my shrink), PMS, and a few other things. My ears can hear a dog whistle, any loud high pitch noises hurt my ears and I get a migraine

some people write them with capitals others don't, its a matter of opinion and matter of deciding what you like best. what i prefer depends on the mood and how lazy i am.
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:wow: My ears are tiny in size and I also hate high-pitched whistles... :XD:

:) Everyone's different. :nod: I can accept that. ;)
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Frozenonthesea Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
my ears are about normal size.

yes definitely, and me too, I can accept differences too.
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:)

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ohmyninja Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
wow, this is really great! i like it a lot!
i entered that contest too!
good luck!
:]]
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